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Saturday, May 29, 2010

On the River 1 of 4

 
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12 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice...love to spend time on the river...we would let leaves go and water them run the rapids...

Gillena Cox said...

smooth stones
sharp stones
stones
down by the river
aflow
flow
thoughts in contemplation
words
words in hibernation
shadows emerge
to a sprng of
fresh green
poetry life
where verse directs
the heart song of a lurid
trickle over a bed
of river silt
how deep in into the earths layers
seeps the silt of
immersed concentration
lintening to hear
the sounds
silent in the heart
of a universe
always
saying something
of
universal measure

much love
gillena

...just replyiny to your river, on a rainy day

TALON said...

There's something so soothing about water...

Marcel Peltier said...

Soft...

The Dark Lord said...

Beautiful, your words appear to be intricate and well defined images. Always a wonder to go through them.
And, it seems I am frequently on an apologising spree; sorry, once again, for the long absence! I know you know, I missed your blog and compositions all the while!

Lorraine said...

Look at the water Brian, it's all oily yellow, it's a heartbreaker!

I love what you wrote, it's the other side of heartbreak, before the river became soiled

I agree Talon, I love water, river, ocean, creak, more than anything else, so why are we polluting everything

Marcel, polluted...

No apologies necessary tDL and thank you :)

namaki said...

Parfait ! Quelle inspiration, vraiment !

Lorraine said...

Merci beaucoup Dominique :)

Seraphine said...

leaf kisses!
i love your imagination and sense of humor.

Lorraine said...

Thanks so much Sera :)

magiceye said...

love this!

Lorraine said...

Thanks a lot Magiceye, long time no see ;)